No one can see it but me
The feelings in motion complete
In comparison I have her beat
Fingers lock igniting eyes with concern of more
Knowing in time hurt is enstore
On a chariot fueled by the butterflies, my heart soars
Surprised with my patience she can barely speak
At a loss for word when our lips meet
Innocence detected as we make way into sheets
Clothes getting itchy begging to come off
Mind out of control touching skin so soft
Thinking a great hand to have called her bluff
Hands on my chest as her face steers right
I can't help but wonder why I came here tonight
With tears she wants me out of her sight
Walkin the guilt of her crying, I got nowhere near a mile
Matching thoughts I gave her a smile
Knowing I would have to wait another long while
What did you think????? ...First time
Comments
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i like this. you make this so general in a specific way. =]
in my opinion those are the best poems! great job

