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A Late Night at Work

Boredom falls heavy
Upon my eyelids
I follow the clock
Too closely, perhaps
Time drips like water
From a loose faucet,
Slowly hitting naught,
But small hopes, vanquished

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  • Hugh Wyndham
    November 7
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    you pen sadness as well, nice work


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 7

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    Much like a watched pot never boils, paying too close attention to a clock makes the time drag, my Friend.