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Thrill Rising

Minding, melding, flowing through
and around.
Up and over heart blinks in the corners
of your eyes.

No inhibitions,
nothing at all to hold back
because together we're open books-
waiting to read and be read.

Walking out on the tight rope
and taking the final leaping bound:
of faith;
seeing the sweet caress and you'll be able to step on the ledge.

That light that was once dim and almost out
I'll bring it back again.
Light me away and truly you are the one.


You are my one and only and I choose no other.
If only there were a way to say,
but maybe my glaces and touches can speak volumes.
Never before and never again I do believe;
You are mine and I am yours.

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