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War is and Peace is....

War is a show
War is a game to some
War is death
War is not the answer
War is immature
War is bloodshed
War is that mother crying
War is the baby left alone
War is rivers of blood

War is Hate
War hates Peace?

Peace is Love
Peace is kisses
Peace is hugs
Peace is the moon
Peace is a flower
Peace is a white dove
Peace is beautiful
Peace is what we want
Peace hates War?

Is it O.K its my first Poem?

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  • Debbydoes
    November 7

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    I like this, except for the war is peace? peace is war?

    I think I would be more inclined to wrote, war hates peace, peace hates war....
    but that's just me.

    • awesomeEmma
      November 7
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      I think your right about the war is peace stuff i just needed an ending