Blood runs down my back
From this abrupt knife
Ive dealt with this shit
For about half my life
They say they dont judge
But of course its all lies
If its not vocal, with their eyes
Its not until you turn
That they make all the fun
What did i do?
What have i done?
To them im not a person
Just cheap entertainment
This isnt a life
But a plot of entrapment
Were supposed to be equal
One in the same
But who listens to the rules?
I mean, life's just a game
The rules are broken
And the players cheat
If i dont match them
Ill admit defeat
Arent we allowed to be happy?
I dont see that anymore
Im slowly sinking
Sinking to the floor
Im gradually dissapearing
Just a crack in the wood
i try to be optimistic
And look for the good
But my patience is worn
And my nerves are thin
I dont know what to do
Or how to win
Your supposed to be my friend
At least thats what i thought
For life until the end
but thats what im taught
of course it doesnt work
cause thats just wack
and once again
you stab me in the back
how did i do? honesty please -.-
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very deep...I can relate, fabulous job
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wow thats how i tend to feel alot now
i like how you put it in a poem very good
keep writing
-Rai
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An excellent expression of frustration and disappointment within the lack of friendship that is meant to be there; it is unfair when people treat their mates like dirt and I sincerely hope you get away from them and find real ones
Poetically I’d recommend capitalizing your Is and being careful with grammar i.e. "im" --> "I'm"
"Your supposed to be my friend" --> "Your" - "You're" as you are saying "You are"
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~Manda
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This is amazing. A true way to describe life. Anyone who dissagrees with this has not experianced the full blows of life. Your poem stands out because it unmasks the truth and shows whats truelly there. There is no sugarcoating in this poem. Excellent. I can relate because I live this life in school everyday. I hope that soon this life changes for the better.
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totally discribing all of my friends(so called friends i mean)
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