Intermingled with crimson,
snow white petals fall
upon fractured earth.
Forming patterns as random as
the scattered thoughts of
a confused mind.
One by one they drift silently,
until they create a carpet of
broken promises.
Lavender winds brush them aside.
Stepping across the acidic residue,
a hopeful heart reaches out
a nervous hand,
and plucks another daisy.
The cycle begins anew.
A contest entry
- sierra mist kisses; rounds contest: round one by wraven.
400 points, ended November 20, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Contest by Blue-Rose Beauty.
1050 points, ended November 25, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything goes by Deathanddecay.
900 points, ended December 4, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Intermingled with crimson,
snow white petals fall
Wow.. so lovely, your words are amazing.
Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest. This is a real treasure.
9.1/10
- Blue
beauty
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please space out UN in AN
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wow i love the imagery great write daddy
love
luna
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Breath taking.............
Seriously this is a beautiful write...The lay out gave that pause... waiting for the next enchanting line to begin and sweep away the reader...
It is truly beautiful, my dear friend...
Hope to see more soon...
HUGE
's to you
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Yay!
I loved it, so many things can come from it, yet I understood exactly what you are getting across. Splendid as always.
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wow, very lovely in its own sense i enjoyed it and i loved how well you wrote it
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wow this is lovely. it was worded perfectly and it really painted a picture. so beautiful!
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this s splendid...layer upon layer of hand crafted lace dreams...simply excellent....the last verse is the perfect closure
nice write
T
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