A single leaf fallen from the tree
moving slowly side to side on its descent
bruised ,detached from its whole
removed from its soul , heart and body ..
as soon it falls it leaves emptiness
lacking of what is missing
love ...
leaving shadow of it self , incomplete leaf
places it self in hole ..
waiting to be seen
slowly dying without realizing it self
before it fell it was already lost .
long began the descent from its whole
long had the loneliness taken its toll
frustrated and weak
leaving this leaf fragmented
knowing it will never be whole
without its tree
without love...
Author notes
i wrote this one of my worst days i looked outside i noticed leef falling from tree in weard way i felt like it was me .sometimes we all get lost..
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this is beautiful.. simply beautiful. its so deep but simple and sad, this reminds me of me, i cannot say more..
much love.
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thank you for taking your time to read my poem
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so deep and detailed. beautiful. thank you for entering.
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thank you again i love that you came up with so many prompts .. i especialy love the darren hayes song
44.We never sleep we're always holdin' hands
Kissin' for hours talkin' makin' plans
I feel like a better man
Just being in the same room
We never sleep there's just so much to do
Too much to say
Can't close my eyes when I'm with you
Insatiable the way I'm loving you"
iam going to do that next . iam feeling inspired -
Divine.
Damn. This is breathtaking. I love this. This could not have been more beautifully penned. It's simplicity, in contrast to it's bluntness. The metaphors of the flow and the rebirth of a tone that was long forgotten in tradition. Great write. Keep up the great work. Thanks for Entering and Good Luck. And, as always, Keep Writing.
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Can't Wait.
Thank you for informing me. I'm very eager to see what you're going to do.!
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