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Ice Queen

When leaves have fallen and skies turned to grey
The night keeps on closing in on the day
A nightingale sings his song of farewell
You'd better hide from her freezing hell

On cold wings she's coming
You'd better keep moving
For warmth, you'll be longing
Any day
Come on, just feel it?
Don't you see it?
You'd better believe

When she embraces
Your heart turns to stone
She comes at night when you're all alone
And when she whispers
Your blood shall run cold
You'd better hide before she finds you

Whenever she hears raging
She takes a life away
Haven't you seen
Haven't you seen
The ruins of her world

Whenever she hears raging
She takes a life away
Haven't you seen
Haven't you seen
The ruins of her world

She covers the Earth with a breathtaking cloak
The sun awakes and melts it away
The world now opens its eyes and sees
The dawning of a new day

On cold wings she's coming
You'd better keep moving
For warmth, you'll be longing
Any day
Come on you feel it
Don't you see it
You'd better believe

Whenever she hears raging
She takes life away
Haven't you seen
Haven't you seen
The ruins of her world

Whenever she hears raging
She takes life away
Haven't you seen
Haven't you seen
The ruins of her world

Author notes

Song I wrote a long time ago. SML didnt fit it. Needs to be a female singer. Any takers?

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  • raspberry Greeters member
    November 9

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    A Hallo from all of us. Welcome to the Site.
    This is such a jolly poem ~ A dream like craft penned here Nice work. Keep it up..
    Hope you enjoy being around..

    Cheers,
    Archana
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  • I absolutely loved the imagery! This was very enjoyable.