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Hindi haiku

ek chidiya
khule aansman mein ud rahi--
zameen par parchayi nahi
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ek aurat
angithi par roti shek rahi--
awaaz khansi ki
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hare ped
ke niche chote paudhe--
dhup aur chaon
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ek chuha
daurkar bil me ghusa--
rotiya gayab
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thandi hawayein
badan ke roye khadi karti--
tez bukhar

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Haiku in hindi

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  • abuyi
    November 14
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    all the haiku's are nice... just not the perfect 5-7-5 syllabi.
    I really enjoyed reading it..


  • fatizeh
    November 7
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    nice i liked this.
    good luck in here


  • chinmay
    November 7
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    Absolutely fascinating Haiku. Well done, Mou.