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Beauty

Your face is that of an angel's.
Your smile is like the sun.
Your hair is parted perfectly,
Your skin shines like the moon.

It fooled me.
It did.
I guess beauty gets the best
Of everyone.
Fools everyone.

Beauty causes so much pain.

You hid behind
Your beautiful mask.
I was dazzled
And I couldn't get my heart back.

I can see through you-
Your heart is
Made of stone.

Mine is broken,
Made of glass.

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  • Sweet-Pea7
    November 8
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    Aww. I'm sorry. The last stanza made me wanna cry. And, like all of your poetry, this is good. : )


  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 8
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    thank you for entering

    Beauty is pain
    a really great write and some people can be so stupid, great job!
    good luck and thanks for entering!
    -penguin-


  • MacyDawn
    November 7
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    Whoa, this is good.
    Sorry about him being such an ass.