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A True Loves Kiss

Seek not
whispered words from me
they carry little weight

Let me be there
by your side
to your needs I'll abide


A gift of flowers
gestures of love
so poeticly

Instead
dine at my table
savoring the taste of love


The only gifts
I can endow may
not be what you seek

A true loves kiss
a gentle hand
of all else I'm remiss

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Now I will have to go listen to the song. Hopefully this is what you're looking for.

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  • Catressa gold member
    November 21
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    you have such a romantic nature.. Hmm shame I can't take a dab of this off this computer.. hahahaha

    You never cease to make me go.. ahhhh..

    I hope you are well sweet man,

    Take care,
    Cat


    • faderman1959
      November 22
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      I'm doing well cat. I hope all is going great for you also. I'm glad you found a little pleasure in it. You can have a dab anytime you like! Thanks for the visit, I always love to hear from you.


  • Sandygram
    November 19
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    Beautiful My Friend

    Your poem is as lovely as the song and background you chose. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Hugs and Smiles dear friend. Take care.

    Bless You, Sandy


    • faderman1959
      November 22
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      Thanks sandy! Its great to hear from you. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 14
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    Beautifully romantic!!

    Don't tell me you've never heard the song !!!!!!!! I hope you listened to it and loved it as we all do

    • faderman1959
      November 15
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      I don't know how I've missed it as I really like U2. It must be a fluke. I did go and listen to it and really enjoyed it! I'm glad you found it romantic. If only more people would seek what is really valuable. A good soul! Thanks kiwi!

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