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Unrevised Bliss

Shutting them beneath my lashes
Holding them in tight
allowing them to leave
just for tonight

I wake in a white room
heavens are in bloom
am I dead or am I
alive

because I need to breathe
and I cannot sleep
the white flashes towards
me

id like to think this word
would never stop
but then id think about it
this world can always drop

I hate to think this world
will never ever pause
but then I live in
the streaming rush

I love to think that I
one day will fly
to the heavens where all
will be peace

I hope that one day,
a stranger comes my way
takes me off today
from here

because I

will believe

they love me.

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