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Sixty Nine ways to Play

Hips lower over waiting lips
parting your wetness
soft moans flow with each flick of the tongue

Your head lowers
and hand holds tight
softly sucking my tip

Our bodies locked
as each takes the other to their limit
sucking and licking

Drowning me in your juices
your body shakes with orgasmic bliss
as your mouth takes me all the in

Sucking grows stronger
begging for my release
longing to taste me

Hands start to play
working up and down
squeezing tight

Feeling throbbing between your lips
a tongue laps at precum
savoring the taste

Unable to fight anymore
your lips hold tight
as an eruption fills your mouth

Now spent
we lay wrapped in silk sheets
your head on my chest as you sleep





















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  • zee91190
    November 18
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    That was steamy!!!!! I loved the choice of words, sexy yet delicate! A lovely sensual write.


  • sensualbutterfly
    November 9
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    Holy crap!! That was hot to the point of on fire! I love this piece...reminds me of something

  • daprincess93
    November 8

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    Damn just reading it got me all excited. good poem though i enjoyed it. poetrypoem.com/daprincess93


  • ubercrazygirl gold member
    November 7

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    wow.. holy crap batman, this is hot! Nice job


  • Ms Lez
    November 7

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    Feeling throbbing between your lips
    s tongue laps at precum
    savoring the taste.

    How erotic!!


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 7

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    love the step by step pleaures you took the reader through...so sensual!

    thanks for entering the contest and best of luck!

    love,
    becca


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 7

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    Indeed a pleasureable read
    thanks for sharing...i should try my hand...
    i mean my hand...i mean pen a piece on this..



    Good luck in the contest

    Passionspromise

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