Slipping into the deep haze of lust
My body aches with such desire
Oh how I love the taste
Of you on my lips
I will take you to the edge
With my tongue as it lavishes
Over and over upon your clit
My tongue will slide to arouse
Bringing my gift of pleasures for you clit
Making her swell by flicking
Licking sucking you; making you slick
I won't stop until till you arch your back
Cry out my name with your
Moans screams of passion
With wanton abandon you
Tell me to suck harder
Make me cum sweetheart
The soft gasps; the erotic moans
Drive me to erotic frenzy
My tongue probes deep within
Seeking the taste of bitter sweet
My hands squeezing your ass
Your hips rocking in to my lips
Wildly riding my tongue
Your hands on my head
Pulling me deeper into tender folds
Looking up into half closed eyes
Misted over with pleasures touch
I know to take you over the edge now
I suck you harder, slip my fingers in
Fingering and sucking licking
Driving you to madness
Till you tremble and wildly cum
Hungrily I lick every drop away
You pull me up for a deep kiss
Our tongues dance madly
We whisper tender words of love
Holding each other dear
Your hands wrap around my cock
Rubbing hard up and down
As you take me into your mouth
Sucking till I cum for you
Author notes
picture by faery
A contest entry
- oral fixation -by girl-interrupted by Girl-Interrupted.
808 points, ended November 19, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is just powerful in the depth of write
just freaking Hot!!! well done my friend!
love and blessings
Rend


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MMMMMMMMMM...



So delicious! Makes me lick my lips and well...dream of licking other things!
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Your hands on my head
Pulling me deeper into tender folds
Looking up into half closed eyes
Misted over with pleasure touch...
The desciption is beautiful.

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very vivid description! i felt as if i was drawn into the motions.....
thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest!
love,
becca






