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OMG!!! it's a semi-happy poem...(any title suggestions?)

There is a silver-lining, to every cloud on every day,
I am a butterfly, and I would like to play.
Playing peek-a-boo with the sun, the warm rays on my back,
It's so wonderful, I wonder how I got on this path.
Driven off course, so many things are new,
Such a bright little place, she wonders who,
Built this city in the clouds, where the birds are singing,
She's so happy, so smiley, just singing and dancing.
Curiosity gets the better of her, she wants to explore,
Entangled in the magical city, there's always more.
She's flying around, as happy as can be,
She's o longer falling apart, she's just me.

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  • Daffodilblossom
    November 23
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    mustve been thinkig of jeff hu? lol i luv that u finally r happi enuf 2 write like this as 4 a title kinda like how u titled it but next best to me might be to call it.....
    a city in the clouds or
    hide n seek with the sun
    but remember i like the current title


  • Sara Khan
    November 22
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    Beautiful! This poem of yours is pure beauty, hun

  • A floatingleaf silver member
    November 21
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    I needed that positive feedback today, thanks...nice write...