when I dance
arms hug hills and valleys
and the
mirror reflects
womanhood-
I am beauty.
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Image credit;
Dear woman, kiss of cellulite by *water-fairy 
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wow Indeed, this concept is intense. The end is satisfying, you swarm through so many thoughts to just end it with a definite feel, no room for thinking, "I am beauty". It's brilliant. It's steady and stern. And this fluent beauty that streams through the imagery, is stunning and strange. Mixed emotions from this piece. Nicely worked.
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Your words in brevity are always stunning
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awww, thanks so much david....! your comments are stunning as well...
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woah....now that's some suggestive choice of words! poetically said
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thanks so much for reading! i so so so appreciate it...
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wow
what splendid imagery, again you do brevity very well baby..
short sweet and to the point..excellent work!
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roses are red, violets are blue, sugah iz shweet an so are you....
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