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winter snow

snow is white and fluffy

snow is cold and frozen

frozen snow represents slickness

of broken hearts

guys are the same way

 

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  • Rhi
    November 8
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    Not all guys are like that. Some of them think that about girls. But you have your own opinion.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 7

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    You are right about snow. But you aren't right about guys. Not all of them anyways. You're young and in time will see; but there are some decent ones out there. Best to you.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions, feel free to IM me,
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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