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Two Minutes of Outrage

We call them vets when they come home,
so many of them, right legs and jawbones
of the great body that went over there, so
familiar we nickname them, look at the vets,
wave to the vets, go up to that vet and say
thank you.  New kids think vets heal puppies
but the old soldiers, veterans of who knows
what still carry their flags and wear their
medals and talk to each other down to the
legion until disease replaces their wounds

and we throw a warm blanket of camouflage
over their hearsay heroism until the old 

vets die into quarter-page photos in small

newspapers, wrinkled relics in decorated 

uniforms and funny hats, retired actors

from movies we never saw. When the last

vet is gone we can declare the great war

was dumb, a great mistake but there are

new wars, always new wars, new survivors

to shuffle endlessly down main street. 

It is almost November eleven when we will

stand quietly again, men young and old,

women and children, mostly the children,

thinking about something something

but what does it matter if you don't remember,

never knew or can't understand.  Better,

maybe, to spend the two minutes screaming.


 

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  • Adamastor
    November 21
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    True

    True.


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    November 17

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    I don't know...I think it matters, whether you remember it or not, never knew or never understood, because someone (many someones) were willing to go, aware that they could be giving up the greatest gift they possessed...their lives. (There's a verse from the Old Testament, I think, that says "No greater love, than that a man lays down his life for his friends.) To me, the frustration is that we, as a country (the US), only pay lip service to their sacrifice on that one day. Why not raise our children to know what these men and women have given up. Anyway...just my thought from this awesome poem, that, obviously, got me to thinking. Great work!






  • Allyce May gold member
    November 17

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    The last line is chilling. You really know how to engage and move a person, like a poetic puppeteer. Fantastic poetry, in a way that would make many feel shame; I like that.


  • rollingzen
    November 11

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    I printed off this poem ...gave it to my co-worker Silvana to read ....turned out to be precisely 11am....today on November 11th while the office T.V. in the backround , usually on the business channel, was broadcasting the Veteran's Day Memorial from Ottawa.....she was deeply moved...we shared a profound moment together.....


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    November 10
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    Wow! This is a good write...different than most remembrance day stuff...I like it!


  • katelynmcdougall
    November 9

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    such a good poem! its definitely a breath of fresh air compared to all the other remembrance day poems...

    "It is
    almost November 11 again but it is hard
    to be grateful for what we don’t remember,
    never knew or can’t understand. It might be
    better if we spend our two minutes screaming."

    I am pretty sure I think this same thing every year... lol


  • just mercedes gold member
    November 8
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    Good poem.

  • Rowan gold member
    November 8

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    So sad. Our towns not even having a Rememberance day service, the Legion only has 3-4 members, and the last vet can barely get around. So sad. Well done Thomas. Glad I came back to read this.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 7

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    Worthy Write

    An outcry for preserving the respect and honor due our fallen dead of wars, the wounded, those with post traumautic stress disorders, the families of our soldiers and servicemen and women....So well penned! Your poetic voice rings loud and clear!
    Bravo! Well done!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 7

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    A thoughtful and well considered piece.

    For so many now the great wars of the the last century are not even in their grandparent's memories. And yet it has to be important that we keep alive the memory of sacrifice and honour that let us be who we are today.

    Jeff


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 7
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    wow...this is thought provoking indeed...bravo
    T

  • So, I have often wondered this... what really goes on in people's mind during two minutes of silence... I know my thoughts are not necessarily always on what or whoever is supposed to be revered... are other the same? It seems so... and you have touched on exactly why, I think. We really are so detached, not having been a part of "the great body"... exquisite wording, btw. I love the analogy of the soldiers being the broken members.... reminds me of a Scripture verse actually.

    Wonderful contrast between "new" kids and "old" soldiers.

    It is really kind of painful what you say here... that we "shuffle" veterans. I think few but a poet search that deep into ourselves to admit, you know?

    Screaming... maybe...at least then we'd be doing something.


    Great poem, Tom.

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