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I Can't Sleep Tonight

I can't sleep tonight
I have a lot of fears
Fears I wish I could talk to him about
Like my fear of falling asleep

I don't want to fall asleep
I don't want to wake up afraid
I don't want to wake up screaming
I don't want to have bad dreams and not have him be beside me to wake me up

I don't know exactly where I was going with this
I just know I can't sleep...kind of am afraid too
Every time I fall asleep all the bad memories replay in my head
I wish I could get rid of them and the memories and nightmares they bring

One by one, they do what they did over and over
Then all of a sudden all of them are there in my nightmare
Taking their turn one after the other and I can't wake up
It's so scary to be in my mind....I can't sleep tonight

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  • Gauravrulz
    November 7

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    really nice work......but u sound really depressed in this poem.....all over wonderfully shaped up....leave the scary nightmares and sleep...u surely gonna get angelic dreams.....keep posting..


    • Asianflower
      November 7
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      thank you

      I am really depressed in this poem because of lack of sleep. I am the walking dead...I am so exhausted. I can't leave the nightmares because they always find me somehow.