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A Taste Of Honey

Wildflower honey, thick and sweet,
The taste of you as our lips meet;
The heat of your body on top of mine,
As our arms and legs intertwine;
Rough and hard, your hands all over me,
I can feel your desire's intensity;
Touching every inch of my skin,
Making me moan, making my head spin;
Your mouth on my breasts, I feel your tongue,
Causing me to feel completely unstrung;
My arms around you, to you I cling,
Pain and joy to me you bring;
My hunger grows, I scream out your name,
My longing for you, a burning flame;
French kiss after French kiss,
The hardness of you against my clitoris;
You slide into me, our liquids unite,
We come together in the autumn moonlight;
All through the night, underneath the moon,
Morning light appears all too soon;
As I lie here, relaxed in your arms,
Safe from the world, protected from harm;
Could this be a dream, perhaps Camelot--
Is this how it was for Guinevere and Lancelot?

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  • PurringKitten silver member
    November 10
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    fans face and sighs,,this is wonderfully delicious..soft and loving..makes me think of my sexy Voice loving me...sighs...winner for sure dear one


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 8
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    Beautifully expressed in every word and manner, thank you and good luck, Josie


  • Ms Lez
    November 7
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    You narrated the event beautifully, gorgeous lady!


  • Blueskywonder
    November 7
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    Very sensual and deeply seductive expressed with a beautiful charm


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 7
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    very hot and steamy hun for you set this page on fire with the words of love you penned with desire.. love it... Hugs always Angel♥

    • silver-girl
      November 10
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      Just a question about my poem--do you think the last 2 lines reflect the mood of this poem? 'Could this be a dream, perhaps Camelot--/Is this how it was for Guinevere and Lancelot?' I'm not sure if this is the way i want the poem to end--but I don't know how objective I can be here. I'd appreciate your opinion. Thank you!!!


      • AngelBellerose gold member
        November 10
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        that is just one of the things i love is your ending i think it is awesome hun..*hugs*


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    November 7

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    Whoooo
    With words written like this, I think any woman (or man) would be "in a tizzy" (?!?!?!?!?!?)
    I wish you the very best in this contest, my friend
    Hugs,
    Sandy

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