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Summer Friend


never had a friend like you my darling one
summer friend of windy days
and misty sun
eager laughter spilling
over your sweet face
walking in the dark
with the moonlight
tracing lace
stopping in for coffee anytime
always welcome here
my darling mine
tell me all the stories
in your heart
summer friend i love you
whisper longings to you
summer friend
oh please,let's never part
come on, let's go walking by the ocean
we may find a shell
or red seaglass
your eyes match the color of the water
your dreamy laughter
like echoes from the past
Summer friend
the wind is soft and salty
stars come out in thousands
as you go
September may be right around forever
another friend like you
i'll never know..xx..

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  • oceanbluize
    November 20
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    Absolutely beautiful! I can see why this took silver. Best of luck!


  • MsPain
    November 20
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    wow i love this one!!!! and it reminds me so much of my best friend!! goodluck =)


  • hershey101
    November 7

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    Um.. I really love it its amazing its remind me of my bestest friend and this bring out memories thank for sharing this poem with me and thanks for entering and good luck!!!


    • Green Stars
      November 12
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      Thank-you so much for Silver...I am so delighted you liked this poem.

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