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Rachel

Roses, red apples, rainbows and rubies,
An amazing cook, a beautiful dancer
Cherished, courageous
Her countenance lights up the room,
Easy to please, fun-loving eyes
Loved by many... a special lady!

Author notes

acrostic for the name 'Rachel'

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  • Tqop
    November 13

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    I really love how you began the poem describing things that are red. The background could of been red also to bring that out, but you did excellent with the poem.

    • harriet567
      November 16
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      Thanks, I'm pleased to like it. I couldn't find a red background so I chose one I liked. I am still on free membership (partly because of using different currency here in the UK). God bless you


  • ZachP
    November 9
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    A sweet acrostic for a sweet name,
    a lovely poem, for sure.
    Thank you for sharing, and I wish you
    all the best.

    Zach Estel.