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The Poem

I walk along the cold frosty path,
and i think about my warm bubblly bath.
I suddenly feel the cold frosty breeze,
wooshing in my hair.
I carn't wait to put on my ball gown wear.
I hear the leaves rusling in the trees
i look down and i see some peas
there are peas all over the place.
I look around and i see a scary looking face.
I walk closer and i see the big black eyes looking at me.
I quickly turn around and i feel a massive click i  my knee.
Luckily my knee was okay so i ran as fast
as i could not daring to look back.
I saw the baker pack.
Eventually i get home and have a cup of tea.
I go upstairs and i see a flea.
I put on my ball gown wear
and i brush my golden hair!

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