Surreal genuflecting yielded zod
zod zod zod zod zod zod zod zod
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
oblong grey matter and haemoglobin raced mad
zero zero zero zero zero zero zero zero zero zero
breath climbing, branching ,twigging ,oxygenated and evened
oceanic turmoil skyscrapers high and up higher still ,moon pulling
focussed ,focussed ,concentrating hard and hard, hard and harder
then the collapse and fall deep in shrunk peace, peace and more
sight in sight the ZERO.......shining and so bright
and calming and balming
snd calming and balming
soul bathed in light
purified and sanctified
till life dirties again
the realization linger in subconscious
Meditation seance was over
and I opened my eyes.
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Meditation seance was over
and I opened my eyes.
Please tell me what you think
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this feels like me when i'm in a manic faze, then eventually sleep comes and i'm all better. natural high and blind dizzy. i really enjoyed this from my point of view, felt like i was running then going to sleep. keep penning poet. hugs~ Cuddles
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The form of the poem is extremely unique; I can definitely say I've never seen anything like this before...It's awesome, really. Honestly, I unfortunately can't say I understand the entirety of your message in this poem, but nonetheless it was very enjoyable to read and I still found it stunning. Amazing job.
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your ability to take any form of writing and show it off to the best of its ability is what makes me smile with each and every one of your works.
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Good job with the visual effect and the word choices. I think this is one of your best I have read. Certainly one of the most different. Keep penning, dear friend.
Sharon
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i love the visualness of this piece
the idea of waves overtaking foundational thoughts....
the rise and fall into an understanding, like knowing, you gotta take a moment on purpose
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this is some deep stuff.....way beyond my hemisphere of understanding....the last six lines is of my understanding.......seances aren't my cup of tea......i have opened my eyes......I can't truly comment on something that i'm not knowledgeable about.....so i will pass on give'n a true critique on your behalf.....I do love your poems.....three applauds for your artistic efforts......love peace & harmony
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