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Gifts That Last A Lifetime

Oh  the  memories  of  Christmas  past,
one  where  a  certain  gift  forever lasts.
How  my  Dad  worked  away  from  home all  the time,
yet  showed  up  on  christmas  morning and  got  us  all  in a line .

Eight  children before  him yet he  carried  a  great  big  smile,
and  reached  into  a bag  of gifts he  had  chosen  along  those  lobnely  miles.
Handing  out  packages  wrapped  in brown  paper  sack ,
it  was  the  gretesr  Christmas  we had  ever  had.

He  gave  to  y  oldest  brother s cross  he  had  carved,
and  to  my  oldest  sister a  diary  that would  take  her  far.
My  sister  linda  the  fisher she  got  a new  luer,
And  annette  the  prettiest  tea set she  so  adured.

For Lois  there  was  a  scarf ,
and  for me a  package  of  sachet.
it  had  an  emerald  green seeting,
such richjes  I  so  displayed.

For  Kim  the  youngest  boy, 
was  a truck  made  from  wood.
Made  by  our  Daddies  own  hands ,
made  christmas  so  good.

For  Ruby  the  baby, 
he  had  a rattler so  sweet.
and  then he  had  us  all  follow  him  outside  to see.
a  whole  stalk  of  bannanas he  brought  for  us  all ,
and  we  climbed  into  the  back  of  the  truck
and  had  a free  for  all.

Oh  the  next  morning  as  we  each  awoke,
we  ran  into  their  bedroom for  one  thing  we  did  know .
That  Daddy  had  the  news  paper  and  the  funies  he  did read,
and  the  gift  for  mom  and  dad was  we  love you indeed. 

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Merry Christmas all may all your wishes and dreams come true

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  • faithwhisperer silver member
    November 8
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    This story reminds me of my Mom's stories growing up...the simplicity is what we need to have back again...so well told!


  • crowd
    November 7

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    Funny Contest # 11
    Howdy all! This is my 11th contest, and much like my first 10, I would like funny.
    I think we should make fun of the holidays, the shopping, the cooking, the relatives, the headaches (you get the idea).

  • mcheadle
    November 7
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    The love that was plced with in makes them more valueable

    than the expensive stuff you just have to buy - or what the kids scream for out now...mac


  • Storminbrenda silver member
    November 7
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    Aww so touching hon love it


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 7

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    PERFECT!!!!

    I was an only child but my parents would never buy me more than one toy and the rest of the gifts would be clothes. As I got older the toys were replaced with more mature things, like one year I got a microscope, another a special book I had wanted all year. Nothing expensive but each had within them something to learn from. Our holidays were spent having a nice dinner . 's


  • ourgirlFriday
    November 7
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    lovely! very endearing

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