Do you know I am living
living close enough
enough for you to know
I am
Am I close enough to you
for you to want to
know up close
and living
Living unless you choose
to remove yourself
from my proximity
refuse to live near me
I am living
close to you
and you to me
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deleted contest: "Did you know I am living close to you?"
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A very good write. makes you think of people youd like to get close to but they look over you .
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It makes me think of the Christmas cards I get from people I haven't seen in years!
Enjoyed your write.
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I like what you shared ...
and the loose wreath form you shared it in ... Distance is not measured by miles but more so by the instances we think of the beloved. joy
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Definitely makes one think about distant relationships of all kind. intimacy and separation and their interplay. Applies to us too.
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Wow simple the best dear...!!!!
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after you read it twice
it starts to make
a whole lot of sense
not just words thrown
haphazardly upon paper
nice one nice one .
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I think about the nature of this write as it pertains to abstract "relationships."
This is a thought on my mind a lot lately. Great wordplay...
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Only you could weave so fine a garment. This is timeless and brilliant.
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