Transparent worried wings aflutter in a rushed flight
my dear you had been largely away and out of sight
this call that came sharp and clear ,which I fear
was made in all earnest and looking for best
made me fly growing wings having had that love sting
only yours is sharp and edged enough to pierce
and it did to the depths that are unending abyss
and on the other side you were so harried and eager
flying towards me so as to get dear and near
we met and voila parked in warm embrace
the gates opened and flood scurried emotions
the symbol was blood suffused cheeks
that hitched the wanting and desirous lips
locked now for good ;never wish to let go
neither me nor you.
Author notes
locked now for good ;never wish to let go
neither me nor you.
picture credit : poetess Jade Butterfly
A contest entry
- ஜ Let MY Drawing Inspire YOU ஜ by Jade.Butterfly.
1800 points, ended November 8, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent flow
This was absolutley enjoyable, the quick fun turns unfolded to a lovely kiss.
All the best in the contest,
Cheryl
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Now this was just breathtaking !
Your words are spectacular.
I loved how they just rolled right off the tongue and how they fit almost perfectly
with my drawing..
I'm astounded and speechless.
Incredible and intense..
Thank you for entering and good luck!!
Mandi
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ahh i love your backround! but you've got a good piece here. good flow and exceleent work.
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you always have such great word choices that float off the tongue.
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Very expressive. You seem to know exactly what you want. I would love to know that. I decided not to take the trip so I'm home today and writing my little fingers off. LOL The trip would probably have been smarter. Any way, this is a very good read. Keep em coming.
Sharon
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beautiful!
this write is magical. i loved it. keep penning
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this is incredible...another intense and beautiful piece that sucked me in...the language is immaculate...this falls from the tongue so well...a deep desire bubbling below the surface...beautiful work...you are truly gifted
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I like this. I'm a fan of internal rhyme.
lips locked now for good, never wish to let go -- a good sign
kudos to you for this one
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wonderfully penned.
thanks for sharing your words my dear
good luck in the contest
Passionspromise
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