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Waiting

Waiting
Waiting around for summer
Waiting around around for Spring
Waiting
Waiting for the next new thing.

Time passes so slow.
So slow
when there is no where to go.

Now I'm
Waiting
Waiting for what will not return
and I'm waiting while I burn
Waiting
Waiting for what I truly yearn.

Time passes so slow
so slow
when there is no where, no where,
to go.

Clock ticks and heart beats.
Clock ticks and heart beats.
Filling all the years and still
the waiting,
the waiting is here.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 12
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    Waiting around for what does not come
    Waiting for that special one
    Waiting till my eyes no longer see
    Waiting till life is cast upon the open sea


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    November 7

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    Sweet one your words are truely understood, as I can relate to them so well.
    time does pass so slow when there is no where to go, the words here....

    Now I'm
    Waiting
    Waiting for what will not return......

    I so can relate to them, because I am also waiting for what will not return, I know this to be true, but still I wait!
    thanks for sharing your heart my friend and I wish you all the best with much love ,peace, and happiness.
    Always your friend in poetry.

    Angel-ann


  • lovers-secret-slave
    November 7
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    :)

    God I love the way you write!!!!
    ...or is that "right" lol