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Tulip Of Verbs


 
 


short gambler, slight of breath and hand
          is her expertise
                           Irises rise when she walks by
                 she never sings or dances goodbye
she understands the art of presentation

  her verbs land everywhere
       she bends down and when she rises
    there, a tulip writhes in her eyes 

it waits, silent 
for the garden to gain my mass
 

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  • aychellus gold member
    November 8

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    this is gorgeous and tender, all in the same breath, excellent work beautifully written


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 7

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    I adore this poem, Sweetie. There is so much to envision, even more to imagine, yet your words paint a perfect picture, as well. Good luck in the contest.