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Too Tired To Say I Love You

When blessed with the gift of love,
remember to take the time,
to each day let them know how much
their existance makes you smile.

That the little things they do for you,
never fail to bring good cheer,
and how you cherish every moment
spent when they are near.

Cuddles on the couch,
A kiss on the cheek, or lips, or head,
Holding hands walking down the street,
or a surprise breakfast in bed.

Glowing with the love inside,
that this relationship makes you feel,
make sure to keep this love alive,
and always keep it real.

For when you take the people
in your life for granted,
love often turns sour and
leaves you unenchanted.

Never make the mistake of being
too tired to say "i love you" -
but have the sense to cherish it
long before, and after you say "I do."

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  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 8
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    This is a beautiful write! The message is so clear and it seems like it would be good sense to never let a day go by without saying I love you. You are correct in the thinking that too many people get comfortable and then stop saying it. Then they stop feeling it, and that is when the death of their love becomes apparent. Great write, I really love this.


  • Rashida
    November 7
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    What an uplifting take on this prompt! Well constructed, and charmingly written!