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Lena, lean

Lena, lean
against my frame
of reference.

My reverence
of your ever loveliness
will not be diminished
by years.

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  • Nick Tashiro
    November 13
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    This is canon good.
    True love poetry.


  • Tears In Rain
    November 13
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    You can always lean on my frame of reverence too.


  • Starswhispers silver member
    November 7

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    Oh beautifuly written, so true the magic of a picture that keep one young for ever, with the questions about getting older left in bracket. Very good.

  • fanniesson
    November 7

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    Poem’s so true
    they do stay lovely
    forever