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web bug

It lives on its web
It crawls on the floor
It hides in dark corners
where dust makes it snore

Hes hairy and spiky
And the blood that he sips
When your near his web
Hes liking his lips

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 7
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    I really like this piece, awesome write ^_^
    -penguin-

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    November 7
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    great

    Very good. I enjoyed this.
    Thanks for entering my contest.
    Good luck.
    Brian