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Once Upon A Time



A monster lived under my bed,
every night he would poke out his head.
He gave me a fright
and then laughed with delight
so that now we are best friends instead


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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    November 9

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    was he a green eyed rattle snake haha..i dreamed last night an octopus shared my home,,that is true,,,good luck

  • Macsword
    November 8
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    Excellent Limerick

    Good work here.


  • Little Lesley
    November 8
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    This is so cute! It's funny too!!

  • refinnej
    November 7

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    This is very cute. great take on the prompt. my son liked it too.