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Don't hate me

Standing next to you
Not knowing or having a clue
Your a sick person
No matter the diversion
Can't you see what you have become?
Because to them you are number one
They look at you with fear in their eyes
Cause now they have to say their goodbye
I'm not to blame
You hold your own shame
What you have done made you lose
For touching her made a huge bruise
It saddens me
Can't you see?
I'm only hurting for them
It's our kids that don't win
No matter the cage
No man should touch a girl under-age
I am glad that this time you had to pay

So here is what I have to say
With no tears, fears or shame
I didn't make the rules to this game
So,
Don't hate me for who I have become
Hate me for who you made me be..

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  • daprincess93
    November 7

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    This poem was great. I wish I had the courage to write some like that.... but I can't.... I'm too scare. Scare of the shame.. Shame of people looking sorry for me. Sorry cuz i was to afraid to speak and say what a men have been doing to me.


    • One Step Closer
      November 12
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      Never be scared to speak. If a man is doing something to you that he shouldnt then he should pay. I went through it when i was 12 and i regret not telling anyone.