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~A Rendezvous of Two... Collaboration

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Her strawberry scented lips linger on,
as feathery kisses taste memories.
A ballerina twirls on tip toe's strong,
arms swaying to romantic melodies.
(PW)

His subtle lips of memoirs past,
brown enticing eyes playing sweet melodies.
Piano music concerto,
Strong and bold, yet gentle and kind.
(NS)

She graces me with romantic wishes,
where dreams become tender reality.
Like mermaids, and fairies, swoosh with swishes,
love’s our rhythm, connecting you and me.
(PW)

Her knight in shinning amour,
tender are his words.
Dragons slain, castles in the sky,
are all he promises her in lover's dreams.
(NS)

A rendezvous of two, embrace what’s true,
as they breathe each breath, within their soft sighs.
Within their beating hearts of love, trust grew,
where inspiration shines within their eyes.
(PW)

Author notes

Once again it is with great pleasure to have worked with you again Tim...Big hugs! Sie

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 7
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    both parts well written, then blended very well.

  • Humm..the universal flow and the sweetness around brings the smiling tone of the love in every word..and that is the strength of ths wonderful poetry..well done...


    • Nature Song silver member
      November 7
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment. Writing is our poets strength to bring the words together, make a poem come to life. Thank you my friend! Your words have brightened my day. ~Sie


  • Lady in Love
    November 7

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    What a inspiring love poem indeed my sister! And Tim wow! Your words would make any woman want you! Love the line in your last stanza, as they breath each breath, within soft sighs. Great ending.

    Congrad's you two!

    Love ya sis! 's

    Tish

    • Nature Song silver member
      November 7
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      My dear sister,

      Thank you for reading our poem. Glad you enjoyed it. Hope your having a great day!

      Love ya Sie

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