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drink

Just one more drink
The landlord did say
Its on the house
there,s no need to pay

I have Gin
For your sin,s

I have Beer
For your fear

I have Sherry
To make you merry

I have Rum
To make you numb

I have Brandy
To make you randy

I have Wine
To make you feel fine

All in all
Drinkings a game
Just don,t become
Just another drinker,s name

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  • Lord Gegishov
    November 8

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    This poem was a lot of fun to read. I don't too often go to bars, but I can certainly picture a bar tender reciting this to a regular who has had a bit more than he probably should have. It's a very pleasant poem.


  • Marjorie Marie
    November 8
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    yes this one made me laugh. fun to read!

  • dreamofolwin
    November 7
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    I liked this It was short, funny and had a great rhyme! It also made me smile Fantastic!

    Olwin.