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no pity for the tools

I feel no pity for you a tool casted away

Used for a victimizers plasure 

Stained your ture colors rusted away by blood 

You had no choice in your master curesed into being used for demented perposes 

Dirtyed by another left to clean your self 

No one will pity a worn out tool used for the toture of another

 

 

 

 

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  • FlipperSwitch
    November 8

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    I feel the hatred- good. It's good to say what you think. I think that though the emotion is evident, it could be improved by fixing up some spelling errors and adding some extra punctuation.