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Love is a Fluffy Towel.

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Love is a fluffy towel,
That holds a safe embrace,
Its warmth in soft surrender,
Dry the tears upon your face,

For when the bath is empty,
And the pain has drained away,
All the bubbles of your thoughts,
They burst within your heart and say,

Love is a fluffy towel,
So soft upon your skin,
It holds you in a comfort,
Of the love you once were in.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 7

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    you are wrapping the truth of the love here and there through your great penning ..love it..very heart touching work..well done...thank you so much for sharing it..


  • Tshepi
    November 7
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    love it

    something to hold onto


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 7

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    Oh yes indeed ...Love is a fluffy towel and the bath bubbles hold are thoughts until they burst! Wow, impressive poem Keith!

    ~Sie


    • Keith Drew gold member
      November 7
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      Thanks Sie, long time no see?
      Yes strange how the simplest words are always the best.
      Just as love is really, there is nothing complicated about it.
      It is just like being wrapped in a fluffy towel.