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I Remain Blind

Bass lick -

Intro/Verse - x 4 - Vocals come in after 2 x - Fast Vox pattern -Transition after 2 x

Staring into a vacant space
where the  light has never made its way,
and shadows consume and replace
the albescence as it falls astray.
Benighted by a dismal silence,
I've lost my mind,
in this cell so cold and lifeless
my eyes grow blind.

2nd riff x 4 - No vocals

3rd riff x 4 - Vocals come in right away -

Tearing at my eyes now lidless,
no sense of agony.
Pulling harder on these chains
that are bound to me.
Pleading to my darker nature,
suppressed inside.
Enlightened by a wistful quiet,
my eyes grow blind

Transition -

Verse- x 2 Vocals come in right away - Fast Vox pattern

Pressing my hands against my face,
longing for the moment that I
will leave behind this empty place,
that I was once trapped inside.
Descending to an abysmal silence
I've found my mind,
beyond that cell so cold and lifeless
my eyes have gone blind.

4th riff - Break x 4
4th riff variation - Break x 4 - No vocals

Transition -

3rd riff x 4-
Tearing at my eyes now lidless,
no sense of agony.
Pulling harder on these chains
that are bound to me.
Pleading to my darker nature,
suppresed inside.
Enlightened by a wistful quiet,
my eyes grow blind

5th riff x 4 - Jericho - No vocals

Solo - over the verse - x 4 - No vocals no transitions

2nd riff - No vocals

3rd riff - vocals come in right away

Tearing at my eyes now lidless,
no sense of agony.
Pulling harder on these chains
that are bound to me
Pleading to my darker nature,
suppressed inside.
Enlightened by a wistful quiet,
my eyes grow blind

Bass lick -

Verse - x 2 - Vocals come in right away - Fast vox pattern

Staring into a vacant space
where the  light has never made its way
and shadows consume and replace
the albescence as it falls astray.
Benighted by a dismal silence,
I've lost my mind,
in this cell so cold and lifeless
my eyes grow blind.









Author notes

This is an unfinished lyric/ poem for my bands 4th song. Pretty epic and brutal, or its supposed to be. Its a rough draft, but you get the idea.

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