Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

A wish my heart makes

I wish
I could become
A blue breeze
Softly brushing
Your sweet smiles

Through my diaphanous dreams
Vanishing like transparent rainbows

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)