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Feeling

Feeling like a kicked dog
You have no idea how literal that is
Sickened to my stomach
With shallow cowardliness
And the respite of loneliness and insecurity seems to overwhelm me
I try to laugh and play along
And I might just go drown myself
Maybe choking or bleeding out
Not much choice left when everyone hates your guts

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