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Blind Thought



If you think I fell in love with you
you got it all wrong.

I taught myself to love you
because my mind's that strong.

But my heart's too weak
to handle what you do to me.

Now I'm asking you to leave
so I can save the soul you're ruining.




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  • Veronica Leigh
    November 7

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    you have no idea how much I love this. I feel like I could have written it. Awesome awesome job. stay strong and stick to your guns


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 7

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    Ah..in simple words you created the true story of the life in such a thoughtful and tocuhing manner..love the way you said it..wonderful poetry...