Contraband and controversy
lived my life without mercy
you showed me love you showed me passion
you criticised said I was ashen
then held my hand and like no other
became my friend not just a lover
for lovers come and lovers go
broken hearts are all we know
then friends we need
and friends indeed
come to the fore
mending hearts ever more
What did you think
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what a sweet heart felt poem,,written just the way i like it.........thanks for sharing I love it i really did..Mark...........and as I said..........we will talk.........later....


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thanks Laura
many poems relate to my best friend....damn fine cook too,amongst other things wink wink ,,,lol
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I love the story of this, it deep, and anyone who reads can relate to it, it loser it flow a little, but besides that, it’s great,

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and still I practice lol
damn flow and meter will be the death of me lol
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