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Pale Skinned Ginger

Contraband and controversy
lived my life without mercy
you showed me love you showed me passion
you criticised  said I was ashen
then held my hand and like no other
became my friend not just a lover
for lovers come and lovers go
broken hearts are all we know
then friends we need
and friends indeed
come to the fore
mending hearts ever more

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  • laura0757 gold member
    December 1
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    what a sweet heart felt poem,,written just the way i like it.........thanks for sharing I love it i really did..Mark...........and as I said..........we will talk.........later....


    • Mark Harrap
      December 1
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      thanks Laura

      many poems relate to my best friend....damn fine cook too,amongst other things wink wink ,,,lol


  • Forgotten truth
    November 7

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    I love the story of this, it deep, and anyone who reads can relate to it, it loser it flow a little, but besides that, it’s great,

    • Mark Harrap
      November 7
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      and still I practice lol

      damn flow and meter will be the death of me lol