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And while I sleep

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In sleep I dreamed to dream you here
And from distant shores you came
With your shining shifon angel smile
That lights this burning flame

Then like a gorgeous fragrant vision
You crept here to lay with me
And love we made, sweet love to sleep
Across that yearning crystal sea

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  • guardianhost
    3 minutes ago
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    Your tender words implore me

    whispering into my heart...kissing my soul , how I adore the vision you impart.
    The Art is a lovely touch, I love it so much.