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I Hate That Shit

Why do nice guys always finish last
And the assholes always get the girl
Sick and tired of learning that my crush
Chose to go out with the biggest jerk
Why the hell does that happen

Why do bad shit happen to good guys
And girls just use me for money or sex
Tore and wore out of assholes getting away
With treating girls like shit
Why do they choose those guys

[chorus]
I fucking hate that I'm the bad guy
For being the nice guy, helping the girl
I fucking hate them choosing assholes
Then turn around and bitch and moan
I hate that shit

Why do girls choose to be with dicks
Claiming they want romance and tenderness
Sick and tired of them breaking my heart
Just to be with the jerk next door
Why the hell don't I walk away

Why don't both sides of the coin matter
And they don't care I got both the romantic and badboy in me
Tore and wore out how I'm left behind
About to kick some fucking asshole ass
Why do nice guys lose the game of love

[chorus]

If you're one of the nice guys like me
And sick and tired of girls using you
If you're one of those guys like me
And tore and wore out of assholes being dicks
Then shout it out loud, "I hate that shit"

If you're sick and tired of not getting the girl
Nothing goes right in your world of wrong
If you're tore and wore out of the hunt
Fucking hate that lonely is the hunter
Then stand up and shout, "I hate that shit"

Ohhh...
I hate that...
I fucking hate that...
I hate that shit

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kenny-streetcrazy

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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    November 23
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    Wow!!! So true.

    You know - you look like a rocker (not that I'm one for stereotypes), and you write like one. Are you a singer/songwriter? I should probably look at your page for the answer instead of being lazy. LOL

    Love this. It reminded me so much of "Hate My Life" that I was singing it to the tune! It kind of had a Seether/Shaun Morgan vibe to it as well. Do you like Seether? I was thinking of "Finding Beauty In Negative Spaces" type Seether the entire time I read this.

    So, I hate to admit it because you're going to completely dislike me now, but I'm one of those girls. You know... the girl that loves the bad boys. The girl that loves the heartbreakers. The girl that breaks all the good guys' hearts. Yup. Or I used to be anyway. I'm married now. Kinda changes things. LOL. My husband used to a double-sided kind of guy (a good guy with a few bad qualities)... but he is an amazing husband and I'm very lucky to be with him.

    So there is hope. I hope you find a girl who sees you for the wonderful, talented, special guy you are. I love your hair!

    Thanks for entering!


    • kenny-streetcrazy
      November 23
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      Thank you very, very much for the comment. It's most appreciative. No, I'm not a singer, though I'm trying to learn vocals and guitar. I do manage bands, write lyrics, book shows, promote bands/shows, and trying to learn production.

      I like Seether, they're groovy as hell.

      Well, I'll never understadn why women choose asshole "bad boys". I'm the typical nice guy, with badboy qualities. Even the best of both worlds isn't enough for women.

      Thank you for your comments about me. I love my hair, too. lol!


  • phylumasylum
    November 9
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    yea, it seems most girls love assholes like that. i'm glad i'm not in that category.

    • Yes it does, and I hate it. If girls want romance, they should go for them...lol. Instead of the assholes.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 7

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    Good poem, but "I hate that shit"

    Seen so much of this in my lifetime. My sisters, my daughters, friends hanging with the assholes. You nailed it with this one.


    • Auburn Sunrise gold member
      November 23
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      uhhhuhhh....


      • Pure Thought silver member
        November 23
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        What??? just cause iwas a good bad boy... I never was an ass****

        • kenny-streetcrazy
          November 23
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          Good bad boy, groovy way on putting it. I just say I'm the best for both girls...the girls that want a nice guy, and the girls that want a bad boy. Nice guy with badboy qualities...the ones that count. lol!

    • Thank you for the comment. And thank you for the affirmation. Not many people realize, or affirm, that a lot of guys are assholes. Not all of them, but a lot of them.

      • Pure Thought silver member
        November 8
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        I am not one to honk my own horn, but in light of this poem I think you will find mine interesting. I gotta go get you the link, I dropped it in the ether somewhere. LOL

        Buddy

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