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Battle

I'm not even fighting.
The challenges come every day.
I avoid them, dodging aside.
I never get hurt,
And I don't live.

Yet...

These are battles to face!
These are victories to win!

And so...

Resolved, I hold the line.
As the danger approaches
I taste my old fear.
But I won't run this time.
This time I'll fight --
And this time I'll win.

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  • LesbianOfLove
    November 9, 2009
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    I avoid them, dodging aside.
    I never get hurt,
    And I don't live.
    Isn't that the truth? Great poem, It flows very well and reads easily. Make sure you keep writing!