Newsflash
I know your not broke
so stop trying to borrow my cash
you're like a leech that i cant rip off
whos beenstuck on me since highschool
i'm sick of driving you around
i'm sick of feeding your face
i'm sick of lending you cash
that i know i'll never see again!
Then you act so much cooler then everyone around
im sick of you fucking talking about me
trying to bring me down
acting like im the desperate one
so lucky to be around you
when i think we both know
that im the one
who doesnt need you!
and youre finally breaking the last straw
the last bit of the camels back
by pissing of my real friends
and running off your trap
so go be a nothing
your dreams will never come true
because everything that you need to get done
you need someone to do for you!
I dont know what the fuck your thinking
but celebrity isnt a college major
so stop fucking be lazy
and grow up
You call yourself a christian
but who are you joking
I pretty sure that ive seen the inside of a church more than you
so dont push me away with that
your not holy enough for me shit
your two face
and needy
and the biggest gold digger ive ever seen
your unappreciative and ridiculous
and snotty and mean
I'm sick of letting you drag me down
I get nothing back out of us
I'm moving up
im moving on
Have fun trying to reach me
When my life becomes somewhere
you no longer belong
A contest entry
- Tell Me All About It by Auburn Sunrise.
1000 points, ended November 21, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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yes
i think we all have those sorts in our life. it pisses me off. how your poem can describe that is amazing!
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WOOOHOOOO!!!!!! Hell yes!
We've all had friends like this. Hell, some of us have even had boyfriends, husbands, girlfriends, wives, siblings and parents like this! (I feel really bad for children of parents like this, don't you?)
I'm seriously in love with this poem! You really expressed how you feel quite blatantly. I would have loved to have given this to some people I knew when I was younger.
I am right there beside you! Every line rings truth and I'm proud of you for getting this out in the open!
You did have several grammatical errors... normally that would be a problem in a contest by me... but because this is all about venting and telling it like it is, it doesn't really matter this time!
Great entry!
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