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Emily

My heart used to be cold and black
Hard, stiff, and lifeless
But then you came and brought it back
The joy you bring is priceless

How I met you I don't know
A person like you is rare
You saved me from despair and woe
So charming, keen, and fair

Sometimes, I think "She must be blind!
She fails to see her beauty"
In the end it's just her mind
For self hate is her duty

She's said it oh so many times
But I know that she's wrong
'Cause when she speaks, the church bell chimes
And the angels sing their song

Her mind is simply the darkest one
That you would ever meet
Filled with fear to block the sun
But her heart is elite

Why must such a lovely dove
Suffer so grievously?
She fills my head with bliss and love
Her presence is pure ecstasy

When I look upon her
My whole world melts away
To pain and anguish, she's my cure
A lovely, scented bouquet

Words cannot describe you
You're as sweet as can be
You've made my heart and soul anew
I love you, Emily

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  • Queen Mab gold member
    November 7

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    This is beautiful. I hope you've shown it to your Emily, it's romantic and just lovely.

    ~Mab


    • Lies4Truth
      November 8
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      He has actually, And it makes me realize all the more how much I love him

  • Ah..very strong poetry stating the impressions of the love through the romantic and beautiful words as well..love it..very thoughtful images you brought..love it..well done...

  • Ah..very strong poetry stating the impressions of the love through the romantic and beautiful words as well..love it..very thoughtful images you brought..love it..well done...