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You Will Be The Death of Me

You are a mirror

Like a view to my past
And it scares me
It's so much like the cloud:
The darkness that surrounds
And binds...

And like a firestorm from Hell
It burns through the chill
Cold brilliance is nothing
To a fiery goodbye
And it burns... Oh, it burns

But I think I know,
And you know it too
That maybe we need
More than we two know
Because that mirror works two ways

My words cannot heal
And my world isn't yours
But let my light divine
Borrow its healing grace
And let the rain erase

And at the end...

            I may be used...

                        I may be burned...

But it will be the death of you

Author notes

Just one of those alien notions that I don't think makes sense, but I'm hoping that someone else will be able to find it truthful in some way. That being said, enjoy

And in the space of our lives, I lived for a few seconds, wistful as a snowflake...

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  • Angel-of-War
    November 10
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    It is very deep

    it makes the sorrow within stir and almost gives a complete voice to how i feel


  • mydarlinghamburger
    November 10
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    Yay, more alien notions leading to the profound writings above.

    I wonder, what starts these alien notions?

    Another very awesome poem thank you for taking the time to share that.

    Keep up the good work,
    Love Lila