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Excommunicated

For all the tears I have cried for you,
I give a toast

For the all the blood I’ve shed for you,
I take bite of the host

For all the promises I’ve broken to you,
I drink the red wine

For all the pain I’ve suffered for you,
I see in it something divine

For all the times I truly needed you,
I scream for confession

For all the times I dreamed of you,
I leave to God’s discretion

For all the times I wanted to be with you,
I’ll let the healing begin

For all the times I loved you,
Was it truly a sin?

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  • IncompleteLullaby
    November 7, 2009
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    This is so pretty. i can relate to this piece alot. You should post more. ♥